Come on finish it

Hmm, damn. I checked out your profile and I have to conclude that this is probably another occasion where a writer died or something... Well that sucks. In hope that you are still living, I grant you a final review for the work done so far on this story!

Wait just a minute here, seven kilometers in ten minutes without Chakra? Even if it is Itachi, I call bullshit here! Do you have any idea how far that is!? I'm not even sure the school has that much ground.

You say Moka went out of her way to sit next to Itachi, but this is in Japan... This means the teachers come to the students, not the other way around. Meaning she really wouldn't have to worry about it. Of course there are a few classes where the students go the class... I think... Most of them however are done in the same classroom. Honestly not sure how that works now that I think about it... Note to self, do more research on Japanese schooling.

Anyway, a fine chapter. If you are still living, I look forward to either a reply or another chapter. Regardless I will smile.

See ya next time, maybe.

It appears I forgot to log in last chapter... Has it really been that long since I went on fanfiction that it auto logged me out? That isn't normal... Hmm, have to check the data on this one. So yes, I was the Guest. If there are multiple guests under this one... Hmmm... Good question.

Anyway, you are basing it off the anime eh? Could be interesting, I personally like the manga more but who really cares. I can agree that the Anime most likely fits this setting far better.

You know Itachi wouldn't have been hit by the bike right? Right? Please tell me that was another shameless plot maneuver and you know!

You know, I seriously doubt she had her fangs in Itachi for half a minute... Pretty sure he would have either passed out or reacted by then. The review written by Itachi in the end also furthers this idea.

How... How exactly did he manage to fit a Katana in his bag past his mother?

Uhh... They mouthed words to each other from 100 meters? That is kind of... Well all I am saying is that is one hell of a feat.

Hmm, shameless changing of the Naruto universe just to fit your plot? Eh, normally I would be rather on about this but you kind of admit it in the best of ways. So... I think I will just sit back and enjoy, eh? What do you think?

Anyway, I don't actually know anything about Itachi's parents but it isn't exactly hard to tell that they probably aren't on character here. Again, seems to be on purpose, and you know about it so whatever.

Itachi is honestly one of my favorite characters, but I actually don't know much about how he was before the massacre so I will have no input as to whether he is out of character at any time or not.

Everything seems to check out pretty well for an intro, so I mine as well continue.

Interesting fanfic. Any update soon? Keep up the good work!

great story, hope you can continue it

Please update this. This is awesome I like the naruto ones but the Uchiha are my fav characters and this is my favorite portrayal of Itachi I've ever seen. Period. He still has the innocence of whenever he was young and the kind demeanor he once showed openly.

Please update as soon as you can! I'm dying from the suspense!

una historia agradable realmente continua con las actualizaciones :)

Very nice story. Looking fowoard to future chapters. :D

Very good crossover and well written. I hope you keep updating.

Well,try not to make Itachi into another Tsukune as there are vast differences such as Itachi is a trained and hardcore combat experienced Ninja with calm intellect and so he has a huge edge over Moka and her sisters ,well maybe except Moka's pops Issa Shusen and her eldest step sis Akua Shuzen who has some training unlike others who depend on their "gifts"...Moka uses too much of her legs to the point where it is predictable

He can have the Mangekyo Sharingan by obscure means like not killing a friend perhaps this is why Kakashi has the Mangekyo and doesn't go blind...well that's all he needs...don't make him a vampire or anything like Tsukune had to,it would be best if he depended on his own strengths and natural gifts.

Itachi is already very gifted and talented at Speed and Genjutsu ...you can give him more Ninja trademark image by equipping him with a Sword like all Ninja ...example like in Ninja Gaiden Ryu Hayabusa.

Shadowy techniques,speed,Teleportation,and swordplay are Ninja trademark.

Tip: Outer Moka (pink) only came to exist after the sealing process so in a sense the REAL Moka is the Inner Moka (silver)and the outer side maybe a figment of the real ones kinder I think Itachi should get to know the real Moka.

If you need to know Moka's family side and their personalities just refer .

Looking forward for the next update.

Well, this chapter was pretty good, though I'm a bit disappointed that Saizou hasn't been permanently dealt with. Oh well. Will the fight with him come next chapter, or has Itachi crushed his bravado already? I'm glad Moka still wants to be with him, despite his revelation, and I hope you won't bash Kurumu. You'd better be careful with the sexuality, as the guys in charge are cracking down hard on lemons with a rule they created in 2002 but haven't seen fit to enforce until now. A lot of us are trying to petition that they should simply add the "MA" rating, and I hope you'll help us with that. Anyway, great chapter, and I'll see you next time!

thanks for the update really good chapter will be waiting for more from you.

please keep up the good work )

I see great potential for this story. Keep on updating.