I like this. A lot.

Hopefully one day, the moment of Heine and Naoto will come because he's certain become less flinchy around her in the manga.

Great read.
Wing.

I'm always a sucker for some HeinexNaoto. I really enjoyed this :3

it seems like you really got the emotions and character down. i'd be interested if you decided to do a multi-chapter story.

i think you really captured his character and feelings in this one, really like it. keep up the good work, waiting eagerly for your next story in this series!

xxxxxx

*O* LOVED IT! I wish there was more to read! The style is beatiful, and is very much like Heine, I would say! Great job getting him down! But, of course, gotta love the HeinexNaoto-ness x3 I love how you developed the relationship too! Fantastic read! Please write some more! 3

This is just beautiful that it even made me cry.

I've always been partial to Heine and Naoto's blossoming relationship and to see it on Heine's POV, whether it may be true in some way or another, was refreshing. Retelling what happened in the previous chapters was a good idea too, since it explored more of what could happen in the series, canon or not.

I love the parts wherein Kerberos made his presence felt, since it only gets its spotlight whenever Heine's out fighting or about to engage in one. Your piece is really a breath of sunshine, a refreshing treat for such an avid fan of this pairing.

I hope to read more of your Dogs fics even if it's not Heine and Naoto paired anymore. Good luck!

Sincerely yours,

Nicole Luna

P.S. Sorry for the lengthy review. I was such in a moment of utter bliss upon reading it and am now feeling a wee bit emotional.

I. See. SO MUCH POTENTIAL WITH THIS ONE! With the newest chapters out, and...OH! SO MUCH AWESOME!