I loved the twist. Didn't see it coming.

Wow, I loved it. Consider writing more, perhaps?

Bravo, bravo,
Loved it. I really could see this happening in the orginal timeline. Very good.

Incredible. Go, Christina!
Even though I'm a bit disturbed that she now has an army of mind slaves. Well, that's still better than letting SERN win, muahaha.
.Congroo.

Haha yes! That was a fantastic opening chapter.

I take it the use of "El. Psy. Congroo." was intended to mirror how "Steins Gate" started as something Okabe made up with no real meaning, to having a specific and very important meaning. It works.

That was a good read. Well done. Kurisu Makise is so awesome!

This was really good. I wish it was continued though. The idea and concept for it is pretty cool. :)

You know, this is why 'Christina (da!)' is so epic.

Haha. 'Lucky idiot.' You really wouldn't believe that he has an IQ of 170 and aces test easily. The only one who can really shoot him down is Kurisu, even though the theory that 'Time travel is impossible' was disproved when... well, she became the mother of the Time Travel theory.

'Gunfire had never sounded so free.' Well, to her. Aren't all these people semi-hypnotised, not that they wouldn't want to stick SERN 6 feet under or anything but... Damn, I wanna say those words in THAT moment. Would be epic.

El Psy Congree. I mean Congroo...