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Reviews For: Before the Dawn

anne mari
2007-06-24
ch 2,
abuseOk, I'm interested. I will remain interested if it stays Aya/Schu 'cause I don't see Aya/Crawford working out especially here since Aya doesn't even like him (he may be attracted but that's it) unlike with Schu (who he is falling for or already in love with). Also Crawford is a right bastard (the traits which cause this being emphasised in your story) so I wouldn't WANT him to get what he wants. Simply put if all of a sudden Aya started to care for him despite what you wrote here it would be too fake and therefore uninteresting.
KittyBlue
2004-08-17
ch 2,
abusehi, i really love your fics, even if my favourite pairing is without doubt schuxaya, and for that i really have to beg and plead for you to keep the schuxaya ending! i know that it'll be fine even if not, but i really love those two, and in your fic they meant to be together.. please? ^^
Eloise
2004-06-25
ch 2, anon.
abuseThis is such a good story and I've been waiting years for you to add another chapter!! By the way, I'm voting for Ran/Crawford if you are looking to be influenced in any way. Please update!!
omymelodynelson
2004-03-24
ch 2,
abusecontinue!
Sue
2003-02-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseI just found this little fic and I really love it. I do like the triangle and at this point I'm routing for Crawford. Sad to see it hasn't been updated in a long time so I guess I never know .
VOM
2002-12-29
ch 2,
abuseNice! Make it a threesome, if you can. They're all hot guys! ^______^
Monou Hakkai
2002-12-11
ch 2,
abuseWhoa a Crawford/Aya/Schu triangle. I thought I'd never be able to find one
of those here. I admit the whole Aya-chan being Ran's wife does sound
different to me but I'm sure you can make it work in this story. Besides,
the bigger story comes within the main triangle :D Oh yeah, that is what I
am more interested in ~_^ Please keep writing this. I don't see anything
wrong with a Schuldig/Ran ending. That's me though. Unless you want to
do a Crawford/Ran ending then let it be, it's your story. Or you could do
two endings if you can't decide xD.
Breze
2002-09-06
ch 2, anon.
abuseIntriguing... Schu/Aya is good, please keep it that way!
teno-hikari
2002-06-26
ch 2,
abuseACCK! Cliffhanger! Bad cliffhanger! I love the Brad/Aya/Shu love triangle going on ... why can't they share? ::hopeful look::
crazymiko
2002-06-24
ch 2, anon.
abuseOooh *starry eyes* My favorite Weiss triangle. Love the story so far, hope the next part is out soon! Same goes for Kitsune Bi and Raven's Pendant! (I think that's the right title)
TearsofSIN
2002-06-05
ch 1,
abusei can't wait to read more
Fluffy Nutty Fluffer Nutter
2002-06-03
ch 1,
abuse0.0 Whoa... you've certainly captured my interest, Silrayn. More, kudasai. ^_~
~cwchan
kaoru
2002-06-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseWonderful!!!!!!!!! *_________*
more please!!!!!!
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