this is good, the story is a good one, maybe you could make a paragraph about the people on the ship, but I'm hoping you'll make the next chapter soon,it's such a cliff-hangar I'm going to die!.

Really good story so far, are you planning on updating?

Trellis and Emily do make a good couple ...I hope they have more close time in the book ! I HOPE !love whatcha doing

Omg! Has anyone read prince of the elves yet? When Trellis hugged Emily I got all jumpy. They are SO going to be together.

I love this! Have you read the latest installment? My brother and I finished reading it a few days ago! It has SUCH a good twist!

ooooo Hey there bud really good so far can't wait till the next chappy! 3 :D

This is one of my favorite chapters. I like it when Trellis holds Emily. It was really romantic. Ever since I read "The Cloud Searchers" I've been thinking of a romance between Emily and Trellis.

Oooh ! Will trellis be able to tell Emily how he truly feels about her

This is SO romantic. But are you gonna write more? You totally should! I wanna see what happens if Trellis cures Emily

This story is crazily familiar to Sleepless Night.
Did you adopt it or something?

Awesome, keep writing

My face didn't work the _ was supposed to be _ if that didn't work either, sorry.

Good! I like it! But I've never seen this show or whatever this is before so I don't exactly know who the characters are... Oh and you see what I did in my story, I skip lines when I write, most everyone else does that. And if you skip lines its easier to read, just giving you advice! _

What a strange riddle... I truthfully don't think I would've gotten it.

ohhh, how intersting...