I know that since you've left this story alone for so long you probably aren't going to pick it back up I just wanted to say I like the start it seems like a story I would thoroughly enjoy hopefully this review will make you gain back your interest!

I don't know what I think yet. I think I need to read a little more. I can tell you that I really like your style of writing dialogue. Your characters speak like real people and that's something that a lot of authors seem to have difficulty with.

I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter.

Yummy!