are u going to continue?

Originality: 5 out of 5

We don't have many King of the Hill gay fics, so this was refreshing to read.

Grammar: 3 out of 5

Needs a bit of work; I noticed a fewmissing period.

Character Personalities: 3 out of 5

I think that Hank would eventually forgive his son, seeing as he loves Bobby. Yet I cannot see Peggy doing something about this; I think that she would support him. Though I believe the community would disapprove, I think a percent would accept the lovers. I can't see the community as a whole throwing them out.

Xx Write on, keep calm, and carry on! The Legend of Derpy, Proud Member of Critics United xX

Im really excited to see another gay themed King of the Hill story. Up until now I was the only one to have posted one. I really like the paring. I Know this first chapter was based on a song but I hope you will continue the story. Its really very touching and I feel has alot of potential.

There aint nothing deep and touching about Adam Lambert he sucks at singing but this story does not suck though you should fix the rating and clarify ages but good