|Reviews for Outlaws Of Love|
| crystal 7/20/12 . chapter 1
are u going to continue?
| The Legend of Derpy 6/20/12 . chapter 1
Originality: 5 out of 5
We don't have many King of the Hill gay fics, so this was refreshing to read.
Grammar: 3 out of 5
Needs a bit of work; I noticed a fewmissing period.
Character Personalities: 3 out of 5
I think that Hank would eventually forgive his son, seeing as he loves Bobby. Yet I cannot see Peggy doing something about this; I think that she would support him. Though I believe the community would disapprove, I think a percent would accept the lovers. I can't see the community as a whole throwing them out.
Xx Write on, keep calm, and carry on! The Legend of Derpy, Proud Member of Critics United xX
| Crazy about Nickelodeon 6/7/12 . chapter 1
Im really excited to see another gay themed King of the Hill story. Up until now I was the only one to have posted one. I really like the paring. I Know this first chapter was based on a song but I hope you will continue the story. Its really very touching and I feel has alot of potential.
| Sailor Pluto 6/7/12 . chapter 1
There aint nothing deep and touching about Adam Lambert he sucks at singing but this story does not suck though you should fix the rating and clarify ages but good