Ahahah! Hans is too easily embarrassed. IF I ever get boyfriend like that, he'd be fun too tease. Seeing him blush would be a sight to behold. I can't wait for the next chap!

You know what's a bit odd? What I most liked about this chapter was that it was longer than the past two. It gives it more time for the fluff and silliness going on in this chapter. Once again, this fits right into the game itself. At least Hans has relaxed around Annie, but where will it go from there, hmm?

I spied some typos and one or two potentially missing words, but otherwise nothing too major grammar-wise. What I thought was a bit distracting was how you "spelled out" the laughter. That might work fine in a comic book, but not so much in prose writing. It's better just to write something like "she laughed hysterically" as it takes up space unnecessarily. Just a minor tip. Otherwise, this was a great chapter!

It's so cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Please continue and write more! This couple deserves more attention! This is a really cute story and you're a very good writer.

The chapters are a little on the short side, but I think this fic is off to a strong start. Telling the story from Hans's perspective is a nice touch, as it really gets across his nervousness and awkwardness. Annie is utterly clueless about romance, just as she is in the game. These first two chapters and the overall scenario feel right out of the game. I see no typos or other major errors, and the length thing isn't even that important. This is quite good so far, so I hope you'll continue it soon!

XD Very funny. I like nervous Hans XD

This is a really good Story!
Hans is so clueless sometimes... But that's what makes him so cute!

From: Feao Elvier

Very funny, I can't wait for the next chapter! Go HansxAnnie! :D Update soon!