|Reviews for Don't Cry Cream|
| zane 4/15/13 . chapter 1
i like it!
| cream 1/17/13 . chapter 1
Aww I felt so happy for cream plus ilove her
| Sigzix 12/30/12 . chapter 1
I never actually did like Sonic X, but that didn't really stop me from clicking this. And my God... It was adorable... XD
There is one gripe I have with this though and it's the one punctuation mistake that's made that is actually noticeable to me.
Here it is: "But its hard Mister Sonic" Cream said, still sniffing.
There should always be a comma in the end of a sentence inside the quotation marks if someone is speaking, unless you're adding an exclamation point or a question mark. Like this.
"But its hard Mister Sonic," Cream said, still sniffing.
If the spoken sentence is ending a paragraph, replace the comma with a period. Like this:
Cream spoke, still sniffling. "But its hard Mister Sonic."
See what I mean? I'm pretty sure you do. :)
Despite that one problem I had, I loved this fic because I'm a sucker for a good SonicxCream friendship fic, and this is a real good one. Good luck with your future fics. :)
| penelopeham19 11/16/12 . chapter 1
Very cute story! I love seeing Sonic and Cream as brother and sister! Sonic is so nice to Cream! Whenever Cream is sad, Sonic is always here to cheer her up!
| hannahtranter16 9/25/12 . chapter 1
Awww this is the cutest story I've seen for a while! :D Love it xx
| mayrosethehedgehog 6/16/12 . chapter 1
Awwwwwwwwwww to cute
Omg im crying tears of joy
| Scruff the Rat 6/14/12 . chapter 1
Not bad...well done on establishing Sonic and Cream's perspectives in this oneshot!
| gameloverx 5/28/12 . chapter 1
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so cute! Umm, about the predator thing, hedgehogs aren't predators. The strange thing is, i always thought of Sonic as half cat.
| AuroraAura11 5/26/12 . chapter 1
Awwwww, so cute! I could so imagine that really happening! Except for maybe Sonic saying "Heck no!"
There were a few grammar & punctuation mistakes (wait ago? Way to go*), but I'm not trying to be rude. I don't like being rude!
All in all, great story, should do bro/sis fanfics more often since you're so good at them. I'll be sure to read your other stories!