i like it!

Aww I felt so happy for cream plus ilove her

I never actually did like Sonic X, but that didn't really stop me from clicking this. And my God... It was adorable... XD

There is one gripe I have with this though and it's the one punctuation mistake that's made that is actually noticeable to me.

Here it is: "But its hard Mister Sonic" Cream said, still sniffing.

There should always be a comma in the end of a sentence inside the quotation marks if someone is speaking, unless you're adding an exclamation point or a question mark. Like this.

"But its hard Mister Sonic," Cream said, still sniffing.

If the spoken sentence is ending a paragraph, replace the comma with a period. Like this:

Cream spoke, still sniffling. "But its hard Mister Sonic."

See what I mean? I'm pretty sure you do. :)

Despite that one problem I had, I loved this fic because I'm a sucker for a good SonicxCream friendship fic, and this is a real good one. Good luck with your future fics. :)

Sigzix

Very cute story! I love seeing Sonic and Cream as brother and sister! Sonic is so nice to Cream! Whenever Cream is sad, Sonic is always here to cheer her up!

Awww this is the cutest story I've seen for a while! :D Love it xx

Awwwwwwwwwww to cute

Omg im crying tears of joy

Not bad...well done on establishing Sonic and Cream's perspectives in this oneshot!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so cute! Umm, about the predator thing, hedgehogs aren't predators. The strange thing is, i always thought of Sonic as half cat.

Awwwww, so cute! I could so imagine that really happening! Except for maybe Sonic saying "Heck no!"

There were a few grammar & punctuation mistakes (wait ago? Way to go*), but I'm not trying to be rude. I don't like being rude!

All in all, great story, should do bro/sis fanfics more often since you're so good at them. I'll be sure to read your other stories!