I just was scanning to look for something to read. And this story caught my eye. I read the first chapter and was hook. I have you on alert. How often do you update? And I love long chapter also do you plan to do a sequel.

Finally, I read it and I'm leaving you a review, lol. Sorry I took so long hun ;( OMG what a chapter! It really tugged my heart-stirngs, especally the end ;( I know in the beginning of the story that Edward was such a player, such a douche, cocky ahole but damn he really turned around. He isn't such a bad guy. He truly cares for Bella and the baby. I cant help but feel for him now. I sort of understand why Bella left, why she took Edward's words the wrong way. But, I still wish she had just talked to him about ti instead of leaving! Oh Bella, *sigh* I enjoyed Jake and Edward's convo. Jake is such a cool guy in this story, I like him in this one. Hes a great friend and supportive. I love when he told Edward he was whipped, haa. Now we get to the sad part when Edward arrives at the hospital to find Bella's room empty :( Poor guy. The way you wrote his emotions, his reactions, his thoughts to all it all was beautful written girl. It made me fele his pain. And then that doubled when Edward arrived home, feeling optimistic, happy, expecting to see Bella, only to discover that she had indeed truly left. He saw with his own eyes, that she took most of her belongings :( So heartbreaking. Then Bella calls him but of course she is too chicken to say anything. See even though shes upset with him and she left she still has feeling for him, she wanted to hear his voice. And how heartbreaking again when Edward tired to call her back repeatedly and then destroyed some of his house :( Oh Edward. Thank God Alice showed up. I love how she got the apartment manager to open the door. I knew she would help Edward out! Shes a great sister. I am believing in you and I know there will be an HEA for these two, it wont be easy but it will happen. They belong together and really need to sort things out! I cant wait for the next chapter. This was so damn good hun! Love yah, xo

YAY! I missed this fic! Glad it's back too.. :-)
thanks for the great update!

okay, now I think that Edward was an asshole in the beginning, and, hearing the small part of the talk that Bella did, I also wouldn't think any different than she did at first. I don't know a thing about pregnancy and its hormones, but I do think she overreacted running away, not only back in the apartment, when things happened, but also leaving the hospital and hiding away from Edward...
I know she must be in pain, and that would affect her once snarky attitude (at the beginning of the story), but running away is so far of solving things... She should have confronted Edward or at least communicated him of her decision of leaving and ask that he at least respected her decision...
I also can't think why she'd risk her baby's health over something like it. In my opinion she should have though better at least about this last one...

on that note, I think it's also time that Edward redeem himself... So let's see how he'll go about it.
I can't wait to see how this goes!
Anxious for BPOV..

Luv..
:-*

I wanna shake some sense into Bella. Rose probably only helped Bella leave without telling anyone cause she doesn't like Edward. What a mess they're in.

I'd like to see this story update more often on a regular schedule.

Ahh Bella... you need to stop drawing your conclusions to a partial conversation you overheard and talk to Edward before you make a huge mistake.

When will Edward ever learn to watch what he says and pay attention to who is within earshot.

Typical Bella - always the klutz.

Bella is right... Actions have consequences... both their lives is gonna change now.

I'm intrigued. It's off to a grand start.

Hey Lou!

Thanks for the wonderful update :)

Oh boy she's really gone!

Can't say I blame her but she needs to talk to Edward but being pregnant Bella isn't thinking very clearly!

See you next one :)

Chilly x

Finally an update...
To tell the truth, I have to reread from the previous chapter because I a little bit forget about what happened earlier. And now looks like drama has just begun.
Update soon..

love it and I hope Edward finds bella soon and explain to her that he loves her and what she heard was a misunderstanding update soon

Good story :)

great chapter...poor edward...bella left because she misunderstood his words. hopefully rosalie will tell him where she is...

Love it fab

:)