That was a funny story. I may be a Vegeta fan but that's REALLY good. I like Goku and Vegeta funny stuff.

*dies from laughter* srry this stry is just WAY funny. especially the part where veggie head has goku's body. lol

this is probably the 5th time i read ur story. its just so funny!

I got confused at this point:
Edward yells, "You traitor! How could you?! You were suppose to wish Eddy away!"
Um...he wants to wish himself away?

Anyway, GREAT story!...this is hard to type cuz the laptop is at a slant on my 'pretzel' sitting legs...

*growls* gr...stupid goku! no wishing my precious Veggie-chan away! *smacks*

Goku: OW!

ggr...
lol

heeheehee! poor piccolo! lol

*GIGANTIC grin* Its awesome so far!

...ok...vegeta...i mean "Edward" is getting creepy...poor veggie chan

Oh, ok I understand...Marai is future Trunks, right? *smacks forehead* NO! i want the old veggie back! he's so sexy and hot! *lol* good story!

ok...now i'm really confused...who's Mirai? I thought it was Trunks, but I guess I was wrong...neway, Great story! Keep writing!

This was a really funny story and a little strange also. But is still gave me a good laugh. I still wanna kno what will happen to little pink Piccolo-chan. Maybe u should make a sequel u kno with Eddy being back and all. Think abt it k?

Hyperkenteliosa Quantimus? Did u actually make that up by yourself?

um... that was weird! Anyway that was a really funny chapter, i hope the rest r the same too.

Well, it is a good story. However, you should really keep your promises to your readers. By this I mean that you tell us what kayka means. I apologize for bringing that into this, but it really bugs me. Maybe you can try and combine another popular anime with Dbz. You can get a few kicks out of that, I know I would.

Awsome story! ^.^