I just started reading your story, and I have to say that you have a real talent! You have a way of confusing your audience but making it clear at the same time. Does that make sense? Anyway, I really hope you don't give up on this story due to lack of reviews because it is unlike anything I've read on fanfiction. And I will review every chapter you post if that makes you feel better(:

I absolutely LOVE Holly, the whole "you can't fall off the floor" has such a deeper meaning than the other characters are interpreting. What I really don't understand is if she really is insane or just acting this way as some sort of defense mechanism. See? More reasons to update! And that therapist prick? PLEASE tell me someone assassinates him in the end, he is so disgusting, it makes me sick.

But seriously, update asap. This story is too good to give up on! Even though it's been forever and a fucking DAY! So please.

I actually really like how you change the point of views. It makes me, personally, more apt to pay attention and it's fun for me to guess. I was so sad that there wasn't anymore chapters. This such an original and beautifully written story and your OC is absolutely amazingly made. Not a lot of people can make their character crazy and not make them annoying at the same time. It's awesome that you did. I really can't wait until you update :)

I can't wait til they meet! :)

Really good chapter, loved it! :) x

Amazing chapter, that therapist is creepy!

Neautiful chapter! I love imprint stories where the imprint is troubled! I can't wait for lemons! x

Aw, so good! So sad! :(

love it! I can't wait for some Paul-Holly interaction, and i have a question for you. You know at the begining, when you said you were crazy, or mental, or whatever? Is this story based on something that happened to you? You know, the therapist, or the wanting to kill yourself, or the mum, or the twin sister? Just curious. By the way, my name on fanfic is kate x wolfe, and i was too alzy to log in.

You are a really great writer! I enjoyed this story so far, and I can't wait to read more. -Aly

I haven't had a problem with the POV switch, I think that you make it work quite well.

The story so far is incredibly enticing and the way Holly's suffering is absolutely gut-wrenching.

I say keep it up, the story is amazing.

Don't worry the changing POV's aren't annoying... it makes the story good, alive...

I do wonder... is Holly pregnant or are it the pills? Or would it ruin the story if you answered... in that case don't answer, I want it to be a surprise :D

But anyhow... the story is great! So was this chapter :D please keep updating

(Sorry if I ask to many questions... it's just me... a lot's going on in this head of mine... a lot of people don't get that but anyhow Graet chapter :D )

i love this ! please continue. maybe you could tell who's POV ur using at the top :)

Amazing :DDDDDDD

Hihi this story is good...

wondering what Embry will do next time he sees the girl... So I like the story and hope there'll be another chapter soon

ps if there are any typo's I'm sorry... my english spelling isn't that great :D

This is fantastically unique and refreshingly unpredictable. Keep up the good work!