PLEASE UPDATE! I' M BEGGING YOU!

I love how well written this is. Please write more soon I would love to see them meet courage and Finn. :)

i liked it that's one of the type of fanfics that i rarely see not because i dont want it's because i can't find them a favorite and a follow to both of you and i mean story and author

THIS IS AWESOME!

I very much enjoyed this. Unlike many other fanfictions, you had almost perfect grammar, spelling, and punctuation. The story is interesting, and doesn't feel like it's going too fast. Please keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing more!

This sounds like a good story so far. For me, I can't wait to see your oc's reaction when talking to FF characters. Goodluck with the next chapter.