I was asked to submit this story anonymously, so I submitted using an alternative alias. But it was me, mississippibellalis, who wrote this fanfic story earlier this year. Thank you everyone who read and/or commented on my story. I am so glad that someone like it.

I really like that. The first time they didn't have sex it seems too soon so I wasn't so surprised but the second time, it totally fooled me

Wow ;)

nice n cute

aww poor bella hope her fantasies come story

:)

OMG! Such a tease. Lol that was great though. It was awesome :)

nicely done!

I really have to say that I've never read a story with two "teaser" lemons before that have felt like full on lemons! Well done! I think the way this was written, was better than some stories that I've read where there's just one big lemon. You developed a plot beautifully, using a beautiful city as a subtle backdrop, and the lemons were in the POV of Bella going into fantasy mode. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. :)