That was just...I can discribe the giddiness i felt after reading this!

"he did not want Alistair swooping down on Antiva City."

Alistair: "Swooping would be bad."

Thought that was funny. Nice work. I enjoyed this story.

I like your use of Spanish as the Antivan language. It gives the words a sense of depth, rather than them just sitting about after being randomly thrown together.

This was... so gorgeous.

Brilliant. Detailed, luscious. Expansive. Reading this piece was like sucking slowly on dark, rich chocolate. I feel luxurious. Your Zevran is wonderful! He's my personal favourite, but so few decent Zevran fics are out there.
It's especially difficult for me to find one, since I don't read slash. Thank you so much for this gem!

I feel spoiled.

-AA

I started reading your story and then had to finish it all in one day. I hate reading unfinished stories, because when I am captivated by one I like to devour it as fast as possible, but am always sorry when they end. I only discovered your writing this week, and have also discovered your wonderfull story of Hawk and Anders. You have a real talent for story telling and you do AU so well, adding a different dimension to the stories and characters we are all so familiar with. I just wanted to say, well done!

Beautiful! I had to stay up to finish. Loved it, and I actually liked it better that you left it without the love scene. Some things are sweeter imagined. :) The fan girl in me disagrees about Alistair, but I guess Sevaka has the right to her own opinion. Lol! :)

I absolutely love your way with words. Teach me, oh master! :)

Woooooo! The Dominatrix and Her Sperm! LOL

I loved this *entire* story so very much, I'm glad it took up residence in your head for as long as it did!

Love the way you've written Zevran! It's him on this page, for sure. Love it. :-)

Awww I loved this but being that its one of yours I wouldn't have expected anything else.

hmm the Grey Wardens and the Crows teaming up in Antiva? sounds like a party lol

Hawke lives! She will be so happy to hear :)

The perfect ending. I love their reunited banter, how she's all "yeah yeah finishing talking so I can do you." That would totally be me lol.

Flawless fight scene as usual, I am so jealous of this ability of yours to bring words to life in my head. I could almost smell him (and in two weeks I will smell him!).

I cannot wait for the M story...I may die.

hmm, I think Antiva City might burn for this...

I swear you must have been a torturer in a past life. You always lead us through their suffering before the end, and I can never quite be sure if it'll be a happy ending or not lol.

Please do remember Hawke's life hangs in the balance :)

Dun dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnn! The suspense, it rises! And poor Drago, to be killed so young... Zev is gonna be *pissed*! xD Can't wait for the next- and final- installment!