I thought this was a Percy JacksonxAliens crossover. But so far Percy hasn't appeared which means this is nothing.

I thought this was a Percy JacksonxAliens crossover. But so far Percy hasn't appeared which means this is nothing.

FINALLY! You're alive! And SOMEONE finally knows about the Aliens. Good to hear from you again.

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YOU'RE ALIVE! HALLELUJAH! I've been waiting forever for this. I like the mentions of bribery. Sneaky. :-)

Do the aliens gain the powers of the demigods the come from?

Hehe. Poor, oblivious Shawn. (Left eye twitches) Dammit Lena! Keep AWAY from my damn brownies! They're special and MINE! You didn't think I left did you? And I'm touched to be your favorite reviewer.

NOW the drone shows up! No mercy!

Aw, hell. Situation just went from bad to total shit-storm in a matter of seconds.

Well, sh*t. Eh, you know what they say about people that have been facehugged: (music starts) ANOTHER ONE BITES THE DUST!

Gah! Cliffhangers! I hate those. Not a bad chapter though.

What? DAMN IT NICO! I thought he was a drone for a second. Eh, whatever. I still think the chapters should be a little longer. But great job.

I'm not shure what you mean by "out of town", but I can assure you that the Kanes have nothing to do with what I have planed out so far. Otherwise I really appreciate you're comments.

Well now! I can see the direction this is going. Bit of dark humor there: dealing with a possible small nuclear explosion. Typical tuesday. Now youve gotta work the hive angle. Also see if they're bringing in any help from "out of town", if you catch my drift. )

Hey. You've got a nice story here. Sort of an Alien movie in camp half blood. But there are a few things that I think you might not have known. Not that I'm doubting you, but I don't know if you realized these things.

Xenomorphs share a hive mind (One sentient mind controlling a bunch of mindless puppets.) with the Xenomorph Queen in the center. Only the queen can create eggs, from which the facehuggers are born. The only thing driving the queen is reproduction and motherly instinct. The drones (The normal Aliens from the movies.) are simply killing machines that have no choice but to follow the Queen's orders. There really is no lust to HUNT, per se. You might have confused that with the Predator, the creature from my story.

Also, if there already is one Xenomorph drone on the loose, there must be more. So, the human death toll would be on the rise already in New York, meaning that Artemis' Huntresses would have noticed that something was not right.

Lastly, if there was a Xenomorph colony, Where would you put it? Camp Half Blood is still alive and well, so not there. Manhattan isn't in a state of panic, so not there. But where else could you put it?

Just pointing these things out. Otherwise, your story is great. Interesting plot, good grammar (A major plus.), good vocabulary (Holy sh*t, I'm sounding like my English teacher.), and a great action/horror element. I like it. )

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