hello, interesting story and chapter. do you or your friends like to draw? can you or some of your friends please try to draw your OC and some scences from the story or make a banner?, do you or your friends like making videos on youtube dot com? if you have time can you or some of your friends please try to make a fanfic trailer of your story? please?. please keep on making the chapters long, i like reading long chapters and in my opinion the longer a chapter is the better. i was wondering with your permission may i please recommend some manga/anime stories to read and review?. please update and good luck until chapter 10, will chapter 10 be coming out in may something i hope so and please try not to take so long in updating this story. have a nice day.

ps: do you like the manga/anime called vampire knight, blood plus, yugioh, digimon, my-hime, bleach, death note, dragon ball z, fullmetal alchemist, naruto, fruits basket, fushigi yuugi, kuroshitsuji [black butler], ouran high school club, inuyasha, sailor moon, samurai deeper kyo, shaman king, wolf's rain, mobile suit gundam 00, mobile suit gundam seed, code geass lelouch of the rebellion, law of ueki, Jyu Oh Sei, Matantei Loki Ragnarok, peacemaker kurogane, saiyuki, princess tutu?. if you don't know what these manga/anime are about please go to wikipedia dot org or ask me, have you heard of vocaloid?. please reply back thanks again.

This is the best story I've ever read. I'm serious! It's my favourite, out of every fanfic and original story I've read! You've done such an amazing job...

Aww, they finally kissed! I think you pulled that off perfectly. I can't wait to see Fai's reaction!

And I'm really curious about that business with Fei Wang Reed...what will come of it? And when will she realise that everything he said is true? Especially the part about Fai?

Ooh, I'm dying over here! Please update soon! *Gives Mokona the power to travel dimensions*

I'm really enjoying the story, but I would like to see more romance.

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!

O.O
Uhh, that just made my day! xD
And such a quick update! I am so looking forward to the next chapter! :D
The "filler" in the beginning was totally okay. Gives the whole story more depth! ;)
Keep on going! :)

This chapter was great! Can't wait for the next. Please update soon!

YAY! A kiss! more more more! :D

Happy late New Year!

A new chapter! I was waiting so long! ;_;

And you made it kind of cliffhanging, too! I'm burning on finding out what this whole story is all about! And how will she act in front of the others now that she has to fear that Fei Wong's words are true? Please write the next chapter as quick as you can! :D

YEEEESSSSSS! Another chapter! And what an amazing one it was :D You have no idea, /no idea!/, how happy I am right now:) Keep up the good work!

I like! Can't wait for more :3!

Uh, it's another chapter! :D

I really liked it! It was a little too short maybe for all the information in it, but I didn't really mind! When you know the Manga, you can totally deal with it!

So, I'm really looking forward to the next world!

Keep going! :D

yay! can't wait for more!

Yay! Another great chapter! :D Really enjoyed Fai and Eri's interaction with each other, wonderful!

Hi there!

I really liked your story so far! You have an awesome way of writing. With all the details and thoughts in the background! Did you make up this demon story in the end on your own? If yes, it's brilliant! I will definitely follow your story and I hope you continue to update it! ;D

Looooove Iiiiit :D The Oc is great and likeable. I've looked sooo long for an Oc story in Tsubasa Chronicles catagory, but they either suck or are incomplete which saddens me. But then I came upon this story and YES! It is wonderful! Please continue and update soon :]