Oh...Well...I liked it!

I mean, you did a great job at doing Krillin.

His unsureness and freguent pauses makes it seem like the character from the show. Unlike those authors who change the characters in their stories, you got Krillin spot on. That's a first. The only things that was off was the whole Krillin calling Gohan "bro"

BTW, you're not alone when it comes to the whole "I hate Vegeta x Bulma thing"

I hate it too.

RAWR Ohmigosh you should contiune this and stuff!

i love it this is why Krillin is my favorite too

excellent job with this story. ive thought of this couple, but i asnt sure if anyone else was a fan. please write another

Cool fic, I sorta found it in your dead journal, you know with the whole do not read thing. Oh well I got bored came here, read a good fic, and then went back to my daily life.

Bye.

Hoo-ray, one of the raaaaare love fics lately that doesn't work endlessly to bastardize and disturb.

I conveniently forgot the episode where they first arrived on Namek (probably tons of wasted time of Goku in his watertank) but thanks for making these characters a biiit more tolerable. ;

that was sooooooooooo cute, u have to write a sequel where krillin maybe hooks up with bulma...

just a thought...

flake'