 SelenaMarie 10/9/10 . chapter 1Oh...Well...I liked it!
I mean, you did a great job at doing Krillin.
His unsureness and freguent pauses makes it seem like the character from the show. Unlike those authors who change the characters in their stories, you got Krillin spot on. That's a first. The only things that was off was the whole Krillin calling Gohan "bro"
BTW, you're not alone when it comes to the whole "I hate Vegeta x Bulma thing"
I hate it too. |
 XxXNatsume'sGirlXxX 7/5/10 . chapter 1RAWR Ohmigosh you should contiune this and stuff! |
 tinkrbell225 6/15/10 . chapter 1i love it this is why Krillin is my favorite too |
 SailormoonxSonic 11/21/09 . chapter 1excellent job with this story. ive thought of this couple, but i asnt sure if anyone else was a fan. please write another |
 Night Sky 6/8/02 . chapter 1Cool fic, I sorta found it in your dead journal, you know with the whole do not read thing. Oh well I got bored came here, read a good fic, and then went back to my daily life.
Bye. |
 Alejandro Lee 6/5/02 . chapter 1Hoo-ray, one of the raaaaare love fics lately that doesn't work endlessly to bastardize and disturb.
I conveniently forgot the episode where they first arrived on Namek (probably tons of wasted time of Goku in his watertank) but thanks for making these characters a biiit more tolerable. ; |
 Captain Cornflake 6/4/02 . chapter 1 that was sooooooooooo cute, u have to write a sequel where krillin maybe hooks up with bulma...
just a thought...
flake' |