Hahaha nice ;) Thanks for the mention! :D Sorry for taking so long! :O :O

XD Ahhaha Ohhhhh Victoria XD

"He nodded and went back to scratching at the wooden table." Okay...that line made me laugh and I don't think it was supposed to XD Haha, just how you said it, "went back to scratching at the wooden table"...it makes it seem like he has nothing better to do xD xD hehehe...heh...sorry, getting a little side-tracked :P

"HIGH FIVE DUDE!" Oh Everlasting Cat I love Tumble :3 haha.

Hmm...something is telling me...that...hmmm...I'm not sure if Tugger really is jealous. Like, at first I thought he was, but then as I read on, I had the weird feeling that there was something else going on in his life, but I dunno...he probably is jealous...GAH! You must update soon! I have to know! Another great chapter ;) ;)

Haha! Tugger jealous! That's just too funny. And I know about the whole needing to add a little drama and show just how bad Macabity is. And death is one thing all natural creatures have in common. So it's ok. Sad but ok. Still loving the story!

I really like this :D I just found it and I have to say, it is very well-done!
Keep up the good work!

Best chapter yet! Love this story! I nearly started crying whenever I read about poor Bella and tithe unnamed kitten being beaten :( T.T but the date with Mistofolees made it better D keep going please!

Haha ;D
HA! Plato. Is. Awesome.
Bella and Misto seem to be so cute together ;) I'm just afraid something dramatic is going to happen later and their relationship will be broken...xD
Awww :) :) THEY'RE SO CUTE!
When Misto said "Just close your eyes" it reminded me of that Hunger Games song...Sorry that was really random xD xD haha.
"I swear I could hear fireworks going off in my head." Great line ;) ;)
Wonderful chapter! I love how Bella is growing and developing (she's a great OC, by the way) and I'm eager to see how she will bond with Mistoffelees! Please update soon! :D

Aw!

And cute and sweet chapter.

At least no one disturbed them.

Keep up the great work!

Aww, thanks for the mention! I'm glad you like my reviews :) And I'm so excited for this chapter :D
Awwww, Plato's so protective of his sister :) He's nice...and awesome xD
Knowing Bella right now as the stubborn, strong, independent cat she is...I feel like she might break that promise :/ haha.
Haha "Little Bombas in the making"Love that line :D
Oh, I hope their date goes well! I have a feeling Macavity might barge in and crash the party though :/ haha. Great chapter, and I really hope you update soon! I must know how their date goes :D :D

awesome update.

Love it & can't wait to read Bella and Misto's date. I just hope Tugger nor Macavity will ruin it.

More soon please

I don't mind the short chapters :) It's what's in it that matters ;D

YAY thanks for the mention! And no problem; I love reading this story! An interesting plot plus an awesome OC equals GREAT STORY! And thank you :D hehehe *faint*

*wakes up* Okay, on to the story!

I think I mentioned this in the last chapter, but remember to make each line of dialogue its own paragraph :)

Haha nice going Misto ;D I love his awkwardness. It's hilarious :)

Wow, Mungojerrie. You're SO good at gossiping xD Mungojerrie ROCKS! I love all of your characterizations of the characters! Especially Plato :D 'Cause he's all merry and stuff! And Bella. And...everyone else.

JUNK SLEDDING! That's sounds fun :D

Haha I love Bella's tomboyish (or would you say tomtomish? haha) attitude!

Wow, Munku. You just ruined EVERYTHING! Well, not everything, but you know ;) Okay, 1. I'm wondering what Mistoffelees was going to say and 2. I wonder what Munkustrap will say! GAH I HOPE IT'S GOOD NEWS! But at the same time I hope it's bad news so things will be dramatic ;D haha. Update soon, please! Ah, the suspense...

SUSPENSE! I wonder what that crash was...And I hope all the kittens get along with Bella :)

This is probably a really, really weird note and I wouldn't blame you if you want to skip over it...but...In the first and second paragraphs, It seems like the word "I" is a bit overused as the beginning of the sentences. For example, maybe instead of "I slowly walked to my door and pushed it open. I sniffed." you could do "After slowly walking towards my door, I pushed it open and sniffed." I kind of just thought of that at the top of my head :/ sorry haha. But maybe combining a couple sentences would make it flow a bit more. But that's it :) I'm still excited to see what happens!

And another note: Each quote/something somebody says should be a new paragraph. Hm...it was fine in your other chapters hehe. But it doesn't take away the greatness of the story :)

MUNKUSTRAP BETTER BE NICE TO BELLA!

Gah, Macavity is so mean to his henchcats :(

Oh my gosh! That's so sad! Poor Bella!

I love how Bella's emotions are described in this chapter. And this is one of my favorite chapters so far, because I got to learn a lot about Bella's past and her character :) I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Everlasting Cat, this is...disturbing...in a good, suspenseful, intense way :D Macavity makes me so mad...which is weird, because he's usually my favorite character (don't ask why...there's just something about evil, magical cats...haha). You are doing an excellent job at making me despise him.

This sentence just sent shivers down my spine: "I stop that thought because I know that if I lose consciousness, I'll never wake up."

DARN YOU MACAVITY! How dare you break her leg! I feel so bad for Bella! I can't imagine the kind of pain she's going through right now, working for Macavity :( Mac is so evil. I love the way you describe him.

Amazing chapter! The emotions and everything was just SO REAL! On to the next one!

Aw, I love the brother-sister relationship between Plato and Bella! It's so cute :) And I'm glad Victoria's being nice to her, or else things wouldn't end up to well...haha.

I'm eager to watch Bella grow and develop (and get along with Plato, Victoria, and the rest of the Jellicles). Great chapter! On to the next one!

cool story.

I'm very eager to read more. I have a feeling that Tugger won't give up so easily on Belle.

Please update.

It's a really nice story and it's a good OC, so don't give it up!