Wow what a interesting and great story! That Regina goes that low of her being so sneaky. I am surprised she did not held hostage or letting it lie. Least she have heart enough let it live. Aww I am happy that least Rumpelstiltskin would not be lonely anymore now that he have beautiful daughter in his hand. well done!

Wow loved this! I can totally see a story with this one!

I'm bawling like a baby...that is all

Awe
that was so sweet!

I want more! :) i want to know how this story ends... will belle be alive or is she actually dead?

update soon please!

This one shot has so much potential - Rumple with his issues raising another child alone - I hope you'll continue it.

"She took her last breath as the child took its first."
Line made me sob. :)

I love it. Wish there was more...

this is awesome i love this story and it makes me wonder what happens next

Wow, very well-written. I really liked the subtle hints dropped here and there about what was going on, the banter between R and R that, as you say, would be almost conversational but they are both friendless. I liked everything about it. Beautiful.

this is so beautiful! :) great job!

Gasp! For some reason this caught me off guard! Very nice.

Oh, this is wonderful! I was hoping Regina was pregnant, but Belle haveing Rumple's child is good enough. Grammer wise this wasn't the best piece I've ever read, but the topic was good.

Awww I love it! You should make continue this story! It so sad and cute