Well... I was kind of expecting that. Wonder now what the punishment will be

I love this! I feel so sorry from Brother earlier on; nobody tells the poor boy anything! I love Gippal to bits; he's hilarious. And sorry that you didn't get rights to Yunalesca :-P can't wait to read more of this!

So far a pretty interesting story, I suppose Lady Yunalesca's way of thinking is going to change real fast...

I think this has been really well written, so far. It leaves me questioning motives, and I like that in a story. Keep at it!