:D I wasn't sure about her blood obsession at first but I've decided that I love it. Great chapter btw, can't wait for an update!

For some reason I was expecting killer croc to appear while they were in the nice story. And please don't stop before it's done because I hate it when people do that.

Sweet she has powers, she's a badass, and she and Edward have a 'thing' aka kick ass story ;D

I love your portrayal of all of the characters, you managed to make them real but likeable and Jasmine is wonderful! You writing is also superb by the way :)

OH MY GOSH. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. Do NOT give up this story.