Will you be finishing this piece? It's wonderful. :-D

Well, I think the length of time I've taken to produce this review is a sign that I'm not going to be saying anything about your posting schedule, RL is sent to try us...

As always the quality of your writing is amazing and Sara's inability to follow Brass' instructions either now or at the crash site his her all over. I also liked your portayal of Nick and Greg as empathetic big brothers, leaving it to Jim to take on the paternal role of trying to get Sara to eat and rest.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter and finding out something about Grissom's "amnesia, but not amnesia". Whenever you're able, I'll be waiting.

I'm eager to witness their first meeting, and how Grissom/Tom Randall will react, if at all. That'd be tough on Sara. I'm a little puzzled too as to how Grissom doesn't have amnesia from what they say, but I'm sure you have something up your sleeve on that front.

And I can't help wondering about this last line, and its forboding undertone.

Looking forward to more, as usual.

Hi - very interesting story so far - lets hope that Thomas Randell/Grissom had some type of traumatic head injury that caused him to forget his prior life, rather than just deliberately walking away from it, and his wife. More soon, please!

Great start. Eagerly awaiting more. Can't wait to see what happens when Thomas Randall and Sara meet face to face.

I almost jumped up and down when I saw you had posted for this story. Now we have some background on Grissom's disappearance though I (of course) want to know more. Oh so many unanswered questions.

I sure hope that disc doesn't stop you from compleating the next chapter. Something tells me this is going to be one heck of an interesting story. Can't wait!

Good chapter and story. Looking forward to update. Love Sara and Jim's determiness.

OMG, from the start you got me hooked...now even more so and I eagerly await more...much more..but you take care of you...Great Job...feel better...

I didn't catch this one earlier but am glad I found it now. Looking forward to more soon; it is very intriguing... not to mention well written;-)

Evil writer, just enough clues to wet the whistle! LOL! Loving this story, on tenterhooks to see where you take us.

I'm confused? Is this a continuation from something or a totally new story and you'll give us back story as we go cause I'm hooked...

This is already an atmospheric start! I cannot wait to see what this is all about! It is so intreging and promises to be one of those stories that keep us all checking for updates everyday! You are a wonderful writer and have superb imagination. I am so glad another story is starting! So exciting!

Ohh... Awesome! So glad to see another story by you! ::cheers::

Glad to know you're still going to finish SP, since that means I've now got two of your great fics to look forward to updates from!

Oh wow. You have my attention. What a great opening chapter.