I think the elderly couple who own the apartment are adorable! Excellent concept for the prompt word. Beautiful writing!

N'awww. This is adorable. Home is where the heart is and all that jazz.

(too lazy to log in... and I'm at work. Naughty!Helen)

So this was great... and don't mind the pun... Fantastic writing, as always. And it is great that with age you're writing has matured and it's serious. Now to convince you to write Original Fiction and we'll have you becoming an obsessive novelist yet!

Prompt 'H' soon, I pray!

I like the way that your writing has matured since your first piece.
I also really liked this one shot :)

But it was a beautiful piece of writing, even if it did take forever to think up! Poor little Jackie.

And we all know there's one part I hugely adore in this story - the Stuart/Ewan moments, especially the last line. Aw, my babies! Gah!

This is great; and most likely spot on behaviour for our two detectives! Fantastic. I can't wait for whatever letter 'E' was :)

Now they speak the gospel truth, everything is more romantic when it's done by candlelight! This was beautiful! N'aw! The cuties!

Ah the banter between them actually had me laughing out loud! Fantastic, and vague *winks*, use of the prompt but it was awesome all the same!

KAPOW! They can stop me from writing but they can't stop me from spreading the love *shakes fists angrily*

Ha! My mother is going to be well amused when she realises me prodding her for words yesterday was actually to inspire us both to write (because yes, I am most definitely going to steal the words OR get YOU to give me 26 alphabetically wonderful words to work from so we can have more S/E in the world (of course, this all depends on them giving me my account back)) and look at the wonder it created!

This is exceptionally beautiful. The prompt "addiction" will ALWAYS be one of my favourite prompts for any style of writing and this just hit the spot. Extremely lovely, characters spot on and writing was superb! Bring on letter B! :)