|Reviews for Resistance and Revelation|
| TheFreelancerSeal 5/31/12 . chapter 1
This was a good read, that's for sure. Your description of the battle was spot one. I enjoyed your descriptions of what Bastila felt, heard, and even smelled as she fought Malak. It really paints a detailed picture, which is something I enjoy, as you well know. I'm glad you posted this. It was really good.
I do have one question. I thought Bastila was a Jedi Knight, not a Padawan. Then again, it has been a long time since I played KOTOR, so I could very well be wrong. It's just a small thing and it doesn't detract one bit from the story.
| Litbe 5/30/12 . chapter 1
That was magnificent. The details of the battle were perfection, the usage of words was pretty impressive and both Bastila and Malak were completely in character. The theme of the story is quite original; I don't recall seeing any other fic featuring their duel on the Leviathan.
I greatly appreciated your writing, and really hope to see more of your KotOR work in the near future. You have enormous potential.