very nice
i have enjoyed just about all of your stories
thanks

Aww that was a very good story. I liked it very much. a bit confusing in some places but very good.
keep up the good work.

...Freaking sappy last chapter. Ridiculously sappy. But I do believe that was your intention. Well done on that. ;) Well done on almost everything actually. And hah! I did finish this one! You managed to keep my attention long enough...

And now, for the next fic.

I just love you. The story you made up, how Lily was 'raped' and all... And the unicorn horn thing. The small details make this fic worth my time. I just don't understand how there is such a small amount of fics this good among all that rubbish. Altough I must say that Harry is quite OOC sometimes.. Reminds me more of a small, shy and curious five-year-old. But don't worry about it. It's only sometimes (meaning 'extremely rarely').

I've read two chaps now and have liked the fic so far, though it's immensely frustrating that you tell nothing straight. And it's even more frustrating that I can guess everything and guess it /right/. It's blainly obvious. But hey, good try. And I do say that it is quite entertaining to try to dechiper all those things you've left unsaid (even if it is easy there is always a little bit of lingering doupt and I have to keep reading only to get those doupts cleared, I'm just like that).
Moreover, just for the sake of letting you know, I've read dozens of HP fics in the last three days (I'm sick and home, I have lots of time and nothing to do) and today there has been only two severitus fics which I have managed to read 'till the end. They all just become too similar and seem to follow the exact same pattern (I actually found three fics so similar to each other they were just the same story with different words. Almost every occurence was the same and happened in the exact same order. And the plot wasn't even good or the chars IC.) but I have to say that this severitus (assuming I have interpereted it correctly, don't remember if it was said to be one in the summary, forgive me if I'm wrong) is a lot better than any I've read today. I might indeed finish this. I have actually gotten bored only once while reading... You have much better imagination than many people in here.
And sorry if this was a bit Snape like rew.

Luv, Caramel

Hey, great story! thanks for writing it! :D

Aw that was such a great story makes you feel warm inside lol you write great stories and I love reading them.

Yay! I LoveLoveLOVE this story! What an awesome ending.


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Okay, at first, i thought the ending was rushed, that there was a whole chapter missing or something. But then i read the little bit at the end and couldn't help but go aw at it. Well written story. An enjoyable read. Cheers.

OMG! This story was amazing! It was practically perfect! LOVE IT! This is DEFINITELY going in my favourites list! =] Well done!

great story! I loved it!

Very nice story!

pretty good stry i likie a lot

I really like the story. Its its refreshing. The way its going its seems like it will be an awsome book. Please keep writing, especially the longer type stories. One shots are so short they are hard to get lost into the fantasy that a longer story lets you be sucked into. Keep writing and have fun. Thanks for the chance or reading it.

Wonderful! Although I must admit for a while there this fic was looking like a soap opera! LoL, Every time I got a handle on the latest revelation something new would be uncovered! But it was all worth it in the end. Thank you for sharing this wonderful vision with us. I am now off to see what else you‘ve written… ~ZLB