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| Reviews for A Spot in her Heart |
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  Ace 2/23/13 . chapter 1 _ I like it. Keep on writing, Quirk. |
 Wapomeo Huntress 12/5/12 . chapter 9This is... Slightly confusing, I like it, but it's confusing |
| Red Nevada Rose 11/25/12 . chapter 9 Awwww poor Bley :( I can't tell if Jem is a good or bad guy, but I like him for now. ;) food chapter update soon please! |
| Ealasaid Una 11/25/12 . chapter 9 i'm confused. Did spot hurt her? |
| Asian-Inkwell 11/24/12 . chapter 9 oooh nice update! please update soooon! and maybe I'll update soon? XD pick a story any story lol |
| Marinaballerina 11/24/12 . chapter 9 This story is very good. (sounds lame-so,ok, IT'S AMAZING!(yeah, that sounds better)) |
| lilmissmessy 9/22/12 . chapter 9 I'm gunna feel bad but your character is a Mary sue through in and out... Maybe if you somehow give her faults and make her sound not like a slut...I think the story would be better No hate |
| The Booknerds 9/16/12 . chapter 9 I love your story and I hope you update soon! I have a question though... is Jem Bley's brother John? |
| Ron W.312 9/16/12 . chapter 9 Dear me...this is a whirlwind of emotions and confusion... |
| EXPRESSIONship 8/6/12 . chapter 7 Good chapter! Not much critique on that... (salt and pepper, XD, i'm flattered!) |
| EXPRESSIONship 8/6/12 . chapter 6 Right to the point on this review: 1. Race does lose a lot of bets 2. the first section on race's pov was confusing 3. get into race's inner thoughts. you did ok on the other protagonists, but race needs more character development |
| Ron W.312 8/4/12 . chapter 8 I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon! |
| Ron W.312 8/4/12 . chapter 4 I thought the chapter was awesome! |
| Ron W.312 8/1/12 . chapter 1 It's a good start. Can't wait to see what happens. |
| Ealasaid Una 7/31/12 . chapter 8 i like her better with Race than with Spot. |
