It would be nice to have a fic about L2 having his own body and being Tali's and Garrus's 'son'. lol Great fic. Which there was more.

the pairing is cute and i love tali. thank for sharing this geeky sweet story.

Well, I think you needed to tell this story. It really is well structured and your control over the description is very good. I like the way you intersperse Tali's explanation with movement from either her or Garrus so that it reads as a 'natural' conversation rather than 'talking heads'. I also like how you included Garrus's ... individual... take on what makes a woman attractive LOL. Turian bad-ass points...

I don't really know enough to say much more but odd detail I really loved: L2's 'chatter' over the comms and his code running across Tali's omnitool. What a brat LOL.

Nice work ;)