can you continue this?

Update! It's a cute and captivating story!
Hayley

Ooh.. I like this. It's a cool idea.:D

Could you maybe have longer chapters? Please?

I'll be keeping my eye on this!

update!

So is Katie in this dreamland? And she met a girl whose in a comatose and there's a boy too? I'm a little confused, but it's a really good story.

Hey Hun,

I like it keep writing, and try to make the chapters longer. Check out my story, my life as a demigod.

Love,

Hope

Nicely written, though I prefer longer chapters. Anywho, I'm guessing this story takes a now-then time change sort of deal. Correct me if I'm wrong. But for the meantime, keep up the good work :)

Oooo, I likey so far :) Can't wait for Chapter 2!

you have a good start but try to make longer chapters and slow things down. Like in chapter two they just emd up fine and katie is not. Maybe like explaning were they are and what happend to travis and conner and how Percy showed up?

OH AND PLEASE DON'T TAKE THIS AS A FLAME I DON'T MEAN IT TO BE. ONLY ADVICE