|Reviews for Why Are You So Obsessed With Me?|
| unknown 5/8/13 . chapter 2
if you start a story, please finish it!
That's one of the key things a writer bugs me in fanfiction
| unknown 5/8/13 . chapter 1
| LARA 4/17/13 . chapter 2
| Tina Fey 4/17/13 . chapter 2
Thank you for capturing the personalities of each character, and finally explaining why Karen is around.
| dark-atrox 1/21/13 . chapter 2
i rewatched this movie cos im bored and now here i am, looking for regina/cady fic. Update soon?
| IchigoPudding 12/17/12 . chapter 2
haha so cute xx
| IchigoPudding 12/17/12 . chapter 1
Haha so cute xx
| toba122 9/22/12 . chapter 2
I really hope you continue with this story. I like the way you've mapped out Regina George's mind. Very creative and insightful. The way she thinks, I really have to wonder what it'd take to make her fall in love with some one else. I'm hoping that you continue this story so that you can show me!
| bloodshark 8/22/12 . chapter 2
interesting idea post soon
| Dark Nights 7/26/12 . chapter 2
Again, the punctuation outside of the apostrophes..
Besides that, still an interesting start.
I hope that you will write longer chapters in the future if you continue updating (which I hope you do).
| Dark Nights 7/26/12 . chapter 1
Very interesting start. The only thing I can really critique on is how you put all spoken sentences together instead of separating them and put the punctuation marks out side of the apostrophes.
For example, you put:
"Gretchen" she said interrupting the girl's rant, "who is that"? "Oh that's Cady Heron she's in my bio class, apparently she's this transfer student from Africa or something and has never been to a real school". Regina nodded, satisfied with this new information "so she's never been to a real school before"? "I don't think so, why"? "No reason I was just curious".
It should've been more like:
"Gretchen" she said interrupting the girl's rant, "Who is that?"
"Oh that's Cady Heron she's in my bio class, apparently she's this transfer student from Africa or something and has never been to a real school."
Regina nodded, satisfied with this new information. "So she's never been to a real school before?"
"I don't think so, why?"
"No reason I was just curious."
Anyways, I shall go look at the next chapter.
| csouthard11 7/15/12 . chapter 2
I really like this! Can't wait for more!
| Be Obscene 7/10/12 . chapter 2
I hope you continue with this, it does have potential to be an interesting story. Good so far!
| Guest 6/28/12 . chapter 2
Not bad, but put more words into each chapter to give people a reason to read your story.
Try to get the next chapter with 2000 words.
| Iolo 12 6/25/12 . chapter 2
More, I need to see more.