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| Crackalive 6/11/13 . chapter 3
Wow its quite a vivid story you've got there. Loved the way you wrote the characters' emotions, but some of the descriptive phrases are awkwardly long.
So, in all, a great fic.
I hope that now, one year later, you've changed your mind about continuing to write.
| Alaynna 8/14/12 . chapter 3
I was there to mop up what was left of my best friend after her asshole married someone else. Yes, married. Not saying anyone's situation is worse than anyone else's, but just gonna say that I know how it feels and I'm so sorry it happened. Whatever you do, don't give him a second chance. He is incredibly not worth it!
All that to say, I think your story is brilliant. It's creative and fresh, and I'm so interested to see how this could possibly end up as SasuSaku. Take your time, take a good deep breath, and update when you feel ready, because you've got a good one on your hands.
| user ill0gical 8/1/12 . chapter 3
Please update this! It's amazing. So completely brilliant! I had goosebumps, GOOSEBUMPS!
| SoSymmetrical 7/29/12 . chapter 3
| Narutoshipping-angel 7/6/12 . chapter 3
*sigh* what can I say that hasn't already been said? This story is fantastic! ( it's ready been said, but oh well)
I'm sorry about the guy. I have not experienced that kind of betrayal, but , boy it must feel awful... So, I hope you're feeling better :)
| Narutoshipping-angel 7/6/12 . chapter 1
Ooh! Sounds amazing already! I loveloveLOVE their smart replies! : )
| Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 3
awesome but why did you cut it there, is sakura's mama ok? i consider that unsportsmanlike conduct on sasuke's part he cant defeat a witch without the help of a witch(albeit a body part of theirs but still) i can not wait for the next chapter
| omgbraah 6/29/12 . chapter 3
AH AH AH
You can't just LEAVE it there. Contine continue continue PLEASE
| Midnight Angel Sakura 6/27/12 . chapter 3
Good chapter. It was interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next. Will she get or away or not? Hmmmm...
| iAndroid 6/27/12 . chapter 3
Do update soon, the suspense is literally killing me! _ Great story though, love the way you portrayed both Sasuke and Sakura. :)
| EmiliaKyuchi 6/27/12 . chapter 3
Go Sakura! Kick his ass :) Also I hope her mom is ok :( Anywho I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Pweety Stars 6/26/12 . chapter 3
Whoa this chappie is kinda...um intense, I guess. Not that it's bad.
I didn't read this in a while, but I'm still a proud Naruto and SasuSaku shipper so yeahhh.
Update soon. I guess.
| Chiere 6/26/12 . chapter 3
This story is seriously amazing. Like, it's short, but it just makes it even more intense and I really wish there was more for me to read now, but sadly, I must way. Can't wait for an update.
| golden doe 6/26/12 . chapter 3
Wow, this chapter is pretty intense.
| EWHH its Kenna 6/26/12 . chapter 3
Lol. I chuckled at your authors note. It's a thing I'd totally do. :P I love it!