I read poetry that are pretty good, but nothing like this... i gotta give you props... lol... hahahaha! hope ya got time to read my material... see ya!

aw, how sweet! That was a beautiful poem.. i loved it!

*sniff* That was just beautiful!

I don't know which I find best... the fluid words or the simple naivety.

Yeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyy!

wow. geez, guardian...when i think u cant write any better than you do! what a poem. its a mix of every seifuu we've all ever written on . in fact, you inspired me to begin writing seifuu ) in only have 1 up as of now, but im working on others. beautiful poem.

I absolutely loved it!

Stop.. making.. me.. cry.. *sniffle*

i caught quite a few of those. *leaves you alone*

OoOoOoOo! _ Nice!

*cries* Fuu...

Long live Seifuu... *sob* Their untold romance is much better than Squall and Rinoa's...

Ahh, finally found it, Athena's Fall Down to the Scream, Chapter 13: To Save a Soul. WOnderfully touching and oooh ... eeeeee love that!

Yup, Kazeno. *Hands her the cookie* Oh, and there's also blatant UC and UO references. _ Oh, and the pier one was a blatant reference to every 'pier-theme' Saifuu story ever written.

Wow, I didn't know you did poetry Tam. That was really good.