|Reviews for A Gold Power|
| shadowrunner22 4/7/13 . chapter 5
R U going to update this anytime soon?
| Archdruid-Sephiroth 10/24/12 . chapter 2
Transitions are a bit jumpy, and there are better ways of point out a POV switch but I made the same mistakes starting out so I can't complain too much. Odd spacing in places but I only noticed it after I glanced over the work a second time.
So far the story seems to follow the basic format I was expecting, kinda reminds me of the first episode of Iczelion, only with less gratuitous nudity. That's not a bad thing for this kind of crossover so please don't take that as criticism.
All-in-all very not bad. I'll have to read the rest of it later though, its so late where I am now its actually early...
| Archdruid-Sephiroth 10/24/12 . chapter 1
I'm not really a Power Ranger fan but on your request I've started reading this one. So far it seems an interesting premise despite my lack of knowledge regarding Power Rangers (it sort of like Voltron meets Chinese Theater right?).
| Gundam Kaiser 10/17/12 . chapter 5
You made Asuka a bit bitchier than she ought to be, but just enough so for me to notice. In particular, I can't really see her using "retard", but I'm not going to rant over it.
I _am_ rather surprised by the initiative Rei showed at the end, though. I didn't expect that kind of protocol breach until later on.
| Kamen Rider Chrome 10/16/12 . chapter 5
Will Shinji summon Piramidas?
| Gundam Kaiser 9/11/12 . chapter 4
Not too bad a fight scene for your first time.
Now then, what's this I hear about a challenge?
| Tellemicus Sundance 9/10/12 . chapter 4
Nice, very nice. Though I think you mixed up 'Tommy' for 'Jason', but whatever! The bank scene had a classic 'Saiyaman' feel to it to me because while the bad guys didn't know it, the mysterious Gold Fighter/Ranger was completely in control of the situation.
But what I appreciated most about the fight was that despite him knocking them down, some of the thugs still were able to get back up and fight again. Damn near every other story out there usually go with the basic one-hit KO when a superhero fights a common thug.
I can't wait to see the next chapter for sure now!
| Tellemicus Sundance 9/7/12 . chapter 3
...This has got to be the single most BIZARRE Eva x-over that I've EVER seen. And I find myself strangely fascinated with a 'Power Ranger!Shinji', and my second most favorite one to boot (the original Green Ranger being the first).
I hope you can find the time and drive to continue this interesting story.
| Guest 7/20/12 . chapter 3
Gundam Kaizer here. Looks like you've /finally/ gotten your spelling and grammar to a respectable level.
I wonder how you'll manage with your fight scene. If you have a style you want for Shinji (is he a martial artist like most Rangers (if so, then you should explain how he knows what he does), or a berserker like he normally is? Does he just go Attack Attack Attack!, or does he prefer to block and then counterattack? That kind of thing), then you should make certain to keep that in mind and establish it.
| Kamina The II 7/19/12 . chapter 3
Everyone! The reason they are on Triforia is simple...It's the only other place that Worships the Triforce.
| Black Ace 0 6/28/12 . chapter 2
| gunman 6/28/12 . chapter 2
Well, it's nice to see that you've taken my suggestions.
Hopefully, it will be enough to help guide your future editing.
As I already helped with the chapter, I feel it is a good work and a good read.
Despite the shortness of the chapter, I think it's safe to say that I look forward to more of yours works later on.
You have my suggestions for future chapters. If you need anything else, you know how to reach me.
Shinji being a power ranger has always intrigued me, so seeing it written up, is in fact a good idea.
| Gundam Kaiser 6/24/12 . chapter 2
The reason the Angels even exist /at all/ is because they were /born/ when ADAM /exploded/ during Second Impact. That means that they'd have to somehow go through a wormhole to end up at Triforia, be dormant for apparently around a good fourteen years or so before awakening and laying waste to said planet, /then/ find their way back to the wormhole that sent them there so that they could reunite with ADAM and achieve Complementation. And just /what/ on Triforia could /possibly/ have the kind of energy that would cause a freaking Angel to mistakenly identify it as its progenitor? And given that, if NGE is any indication, they need around fifteen years to mature, then the universe essentially breaks from the sheer illogic of it.
But more importantly, WORMHOLES DO NOT WORK THAT WAY! Opening a wormhole wide enough for a /single/ human to travel through it would require more energy than exists in the universe (although Kaworu could probably do it, since he's effectively ADAM's reincarnation and is pretty much all-powerful). So, /anyway/, for the Angels to exist on their own in the PR-verse means that Earth-PR /also/ has to have had Second Impact. And wormholes don't suck things in anyway, they're supposedly /gaps/ in spacetime, which means they'd have little or no mass, and therefore no appreciable gravitational pull! Granted, it's possible that a /black hole/ could somehow function as a gateway to a parallel universe, providing that whatever went through manages to survive being elongated into a noodle a millimeter wide and fifty miles long! And Kaworu shouldn't be in the position to explain any of this crap in the first place because he's been raised by SEELE like Rei was raised by NERV! I'm not trying to bash you or anything, but /please/, for /both/ our sakes, when you have an idea PLEASE DO YOUR HOMEWORK ON IT!
| Gundam Kaiser 6/5/12 . chapter 1
Quick question I just had: why did the Angels attack Triforia in the first place? They've come to Earth because we have ADAM (and/or Lilith). Triforia has neither of these things, so why would it be a target unless for plot convenience?
Beyond that, I think you should focus more on the human characters and not bother too much with the mecha.
| EvaShinobiKaiserKnight 6/1/12 . chapter 1
It's pretty good but I out grew power rangers years ago so to be honest I dont really remember much of it but I hope this will get popular.