I swear I've reviewed this before. I know I've certainly read it before. Oh well.

'King Edmund the Treasonous'? I'm not sure an ambassador would speak like that. It just seems a little childish. Although they don't seem to be the sharpest pencils in the drawer, do they? I also think Edmund wouldn't be so unsure of his brother's trust that he would need reassurance so much that he showed it in public. But I suppose we just see that differently.

Great fic!

Caity :)

I love it!

I believe this fic was well written. I love your use of metaphors and similes. Your imagery was pretty awesome too. At the same time it wasn't so detailed to the point that it didn't get in the way of the story.

Some of this reminds me of Lirenel's "Terror Gold". Especially with Peter being described as a Golden Fire.

This a great story about 2 brothers and their relationship and how both act on the battlefield and in politically and in diplomatic situations. Peter doesn't like the Telmarines? Don't think after that confrontation the Telmarines didn't like the High King or the Just King. But they only invaded after the Kings and Queens had finally left Narnia.

is that the whole story or is their more she asked hopefully? Can do you a Lucy puppy dog eyes look that would melt even Peter and Edmund hearts when I do.

I liked this very much. I think you get Peter and Edmund's relationship perfectly.

I wish there was more of this story. :D