i recognize the idea from the movie Third Space. at least here there are more refined details about the enemy,

This was a fun read. I sure hope for more from you soon.

great story so far, very interesting ,lets see Minbar and andromeda Humans allied agaisnt the Shadows.

well looks like Sherdian once again made a big entry and Showed Neroon who's the boss there, great chapter and interesting thing about the Vorlon Minbari history

Sweet telling them that they had been uplifted and none of the idiots ever realized it! Boss update!

it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates

well looks like the old saying that humanity is itselfs greatest enemy is very true here to an extend, well intersting plot and twist now, well great anyway so continue

Love the enemy. Keep it coming. I have noticed the more you write the more polished it is.

Do not be offended or feel insulted
That fanfic as pork, pork, majestic, awesome, too excited and I have not read the other story you have, you stopped me oO while I wanted to make history I have in mind
HarryPotter Crossover Fanfic - Stargate - Star Trek - Babylon5 - BattleStarGalactica

I have to refine my ideas, is so

see you

It s a gtreat story but your portrayal of the time lords is not really in line with what can be their level of sophistication.
After more than 5000 years they continue to hold a grudge against the minbari is not realy i don t know worthy of them.
I would say with everything they have seen and do they might have been apathetic of the minbari.
They might even been grateful because without the minbari they couldnt have construct the machine to move their planet and move in time.
Secondly the human develop to quickly after they move their planet its very ASB

Great chapter Update soon

I don't like the enemy, as it seems to clique. No offense, but I think you should done a different enemy that weren't from alternate realities, as it just compley thinks. Whether it is oc or a enemy from any of the series. Examples would be the Borg from Star Trek or the Darlek's from Doctor Who.
The borg wants perfections by assimilating other races and technology and they are dangerous as samples of Time Lord technology was taken.
Second are the Darleks are the worst as they would remind Deleen of their own species in how they act.
It be even worst if they had to face both at once.

Great chapter for a bit there I thought your great enamy was going to be those damn pepper shakers with toilet plungers stuck to them. "The Dalek". But a dark mirror version of them is better.

The first time lords aren't gonna be destroyed fighting are they?

What is the deal with the souls? I know Sinclair registered as a Minbari soul because of his dna but humans having Minbari souls how is that possible as they hadn't mixed with them.

Damn those Time Lords are going to destroy everything.

Instead of another new enemy which I thought the Time Lords would rescue the human slaves in their home galaxy. Not the augments though.

The alternate Time Lords are really unstable! Though their punishments for the Centauri, Narn and Minbari was great.

Starting to get a bit(cough) complicated for me.
Too many different plots and sub-plots going in far too
many directions.
Sorry, but for me I read fanfiction for entertainment.
Not to have to make my brain work harder.
Sorry but...
I suppose it's a good story for some, but when I have to
reread sections to remember what's going on, I have to
bounce.