I was relieved to see there are more of your stories about Snape. I love how you have written him.

Brilliant - loved it!

This was an amazing story! You captured each character so perfectly... or imperfectly, as the case may be. You kept them human, and let their flaws and strengths show very vividly. Plus the little funny moments you throw in are great! "Oh no! Not grahrse!" For some reason, that little quip had me in stitches. Keep up the good work! :)

fear, hurt, lonely, sad, anger, wanting to be loved, wanting to belong, betrayal

All these emotions were well written.

I love your insight into the young Snape. Also, the unyielding and overly righteous Dumbledore (as long as it's not about his favorites) fits right into canon.

This is a great story! One of my favourites! I can not wait to read the sequel!

that was so good i feel bad for sev :( but we know how it goes... I cant wate for the next one :)

Wow what a great ending! This really is a great fic... I appreciate that you had it finished before posting. Excellent writing! I look forward to reading your other fics!

This is a great fic! I can't believe how close to canon this is. I love it!

This is a fantastic chapter! Please update soon! I hope that Severus learns more healing magic.

wow that was so good realt dramatic!

This is an amazing story! Please update soon!

this is amazing. Im sad that its coming to an end

I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story! It's a very realistic portrayal of Snape's younger years and I like that you've made everybody have good and bad parts to their character.

How far do you plan on continuing this story? All the way to his death? I'd love to see the Lucius-Snape dynamic change throughout the years.

Yay that was a good chapter. I love the Lucius Snape bond you have going. I cant wate for more!