I am loving this story! Please update soon!

Glad to see an update! Poor Kames & Cargan! Hope everyone stays safe!

OMFG I loveeee youuu
I was on the bus and I got an email saying an update and I screamed! LOL
I got lots of looks
I am super excited to see how this will play out.
Who will die? Logan? Kendall? Neither? Both? JAMES? ...carlos?
If you need help writing it I am always here for PM.
Thanks again for updating!
slashlover27

ya i also like Cian. i wonder Giacomo ll die soon?

Oh my gosh! This is so good! This should be like a movie or something! It's that good! Like seriously it reminds me of an action movie! Seriously this is so amazing! I can so imagine it being a movie! And there are movies that involves poker so yeah. Haha and Carlos, Logan, James and Kendall can all be the actors for it! XD. That would be so crazy! Any who! Wow i missed this story! I can't believe Logan got attacked already! Like he was just getting it on with Carlos and them boom he gets ambushed! Haha Carlos being all horny checking out Logan's naked body! But who wouldn't?! Omg that was such an epic fighting scene! Carlos oh Carlos he was so weak and wimpy! All he did was cry and stuff. And there is Logan fighting with his life on the line! But it was so cute how Logan got pissed that the Asian guy touched Carlos. Woah, Logan seriously got mad! I find that cute and hot though that if u hurt Carlos then he kills u with no sympathy. Looks like Carlos is a source of his power. Awwww! Don't touch Carlos or u die! Hahah! And then James getting mad! Woah even Logan got scared! I like cian! He is awesome! Haha calling Carlos Taco Bell! XD that cracked me up! And I could just imagine Carlos unconscious in a weird angle lol that is too funny! So cute how protective Logan is of Carlos! And he was holding him even if he was injured awwww Logan u sweetie. So much cargan kisses and cuddling it was all soooo adorable! Okay anyways, hmm what is Kendall planning? Ahhh I love this mystery! Ahhhh I just want to know what will happen next! Can't wait for more!

love it

Honestly, this should be a movie. Just saying, no long review here, just speechless lol. Just a little favour, please don't kill off Carlos hahaha. I don't like it when I watch movies or shows then I pick a favourite then in like a couple of minutes they die. So yeah please :3

Yay! I'm proud of you sweetie! I understand inspiration is a fickle mistress, but just send me the draft whenever you want for next chapter.

I need to do. Better job beta ing because I noticed some grammar error, ah but all's well that ends well.

God, this is so good, please update soon!

Yay! I was so exited when I got an email telling me that this had been updated. I love this story so much and this chapter was just as great as everything that has come before it. :D

more! please don't kill my baby's! please and if you do kill them i will make a fanfiction and kill you when you find the love of your life!

I know you are tired of seeing my name lol all I am going to say is ignore my last two...maybe three comments there were a bunch of errors it was late at night and I could barely see my keyboard. And I said some really crazy stuff lol. Basically what I want to say is it was a great story...and please update. And sorry for the yelling...even though you said I could. :(

HI me .this is what happens when you don't update
Yeah are you going to do? Are u going to make James fold so Logan gets killed and Kendall lives. So he loses $$ his BFF(Carlos) but risks it all for a smart good. ;). Please update. Please ;(
Thanks ... Again

BTW you can't killed Logan because you promised Carlos u Wld keep him safe. But u also promised u Wld keep ALL four of you safe. Damn James what you gonna do?
But although I love him to death(no pun intended) I Wld like to see u kill of Logan .
I wanna see how Carlos transitions when his nightmare becomes a reality
Oh and his hatred for James YEEES
Kill my love. Kill LOGAN!
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...you know.i had my review all set up about midway through the story. Now your ending just fucked it up. And my night too because you didn't continue the story because...THAT WAS LIKE THE MOST AMAZIN PLOT TWIST I HAVE EVER READ ON .NET. Please Please PLEASE continue!