|Reviews for Onwards, Inwards|
| Nenya85 6/30/12 . chapter 1
Very nice. I like the sense that these two know each other so well that despite the situation – Amelda breaking into the Kaiba mansion – they feel comfortable and able to be honest with each other. You get across the sense of how rare this is for both of them.
| Mandolina Lightrobber 6/7/12 . chapter 1
I love your style. I like what you do with the characters; how you tell the story. It's great that you leave things unsaid and only hinted at. At first I wasn't entirely convinced, but somewhere around middle, I got drawn into it by the way you manage both characters and the situation.
Also, this pairing. It needs more love in the fandom. Am I right in guesstimating that there'll be more from you?