Awh! So sweet! I can't wait for more!

I loved it a lot .. but she should woken up and told she Loved Him too

VERY INTENSE I LOVE IT

Fantastic I loved it

Never before had a man taken such a vested interest in ensuring she got hers.

I just love that for some reason, lol...just the line of "she got hers". It sounds like something a man would say...ignore that it's obviously from the perspective of a women...

That was so sweet.

SEQUEL? SEQUEL !

I like the way that you have Tony and Ziva together; um I don't know if this is right for me to do but I was thinking about the last sentence that you wrote: "His world caused her to wonder exactly how many times he had said those words to her in the past few weeks whilst she had lain sleeping, thinking if better for now, not to let him know that she had heard them. She allowed them to wrap around hr heart as she drifted off to sleep..." I thought that it might sound a little better like this (please note that I don't want you to think that I mean any insult) "His words caused her to pause and wonder exactly how many times he had said those words to her in the past few weeks while she had laid sleeping in his arms; thinking that it is better for now if she did not let him know that she had heard them. She allowed them to wrap around her heart completing her as she allowed sleep to claim her thinking of those words..." Again I like to help but if you don't like this it is okay I completely understand.
Thank you for your posting of this story.

very, very good. I was hoping there was more!

keep it up :)

I found your story tonight; it's fantastic.

I'm glad to see this whole stream of updates on your stories today. As much as I enjoyed the 'smutline' that gave this story a chapter 2, I'm excited that chapter 3 developed it into a true plotline.

Beautifully done! I love this! You are so good with them. Thanks!

I honestly loved that! Even Tony tying her up, it made it a bit suspenseful but at some point she had to trust him.
I'd love more but reading the status it's completed which is sad yet, you did leave it at a great spot :)
Court xoxox

So hot! I can see the beginnings of a story here already. :) Can't wait to see what happens when these two knuckleheads realize there's more to life than rules, hehe. Thanks for sharing K! :)