this for some reson gave me the chills

This was an awsome movie. I don't think I liked the ending with the icy pond so much, maybe the chilling, Alternate Ending was slightly more surreal. But not as surreal as this though, really well done.
I was thinking of doing an Orphan fanfic where it's the whole movie, (including the deleted scenes) from the point of view of the little girl, Max and her mixed feelings of love and hate for her new adopted sister, Esther.
Who later turns out to be a 33- year -old woman named Leena?! I guess we're really meant to feel sorry for her, she's gone through a lot, and SHE doesn't think she's evil, yet we're all-WISE UP! NOT EVIL?! Anyway, this was great, keep going if you have any more ideas that is.

New Question: Who do you think is scarier, Esther from "Orphan" or Damien from "the Omen?"

so descriptive...!

What a brilliant story! This is so good, and you must continue it and make it into a longer story!

This is awesome! :)

I didn't really understand the whole idea... I think maybe you should build on from this.

This is BEGGING to be turned into a full length story! Very well done!