Please please update this has helped me with understanding Romeo and Juliet which I am studing at school. I think your concept is great and I love that your sticking to the plot as close as possible. If you don't update thankyou for helping me understand the masterpiece that is Romeo and Juliet. But please, you can't leave the best most dramatic bits out! Please, oh pretty please update!

Omg so good, please write more

AAAHHHH! Juliet, just TELL Nora. Immediately. Before something tragic occurs... I have this odd feeling about it... *cough* Aaaanyways, update soon!

Hmm..kissing underwater...wouldn't that be rather difficult? Double lack of oxygen...

Well that escalated quickly...

Eep...I know Tybalt's kinda awful but I sort of love him...

I always thought of the nurse as being slightly less manipulative and a bit more considerate of Juliet's feelings. But maybe she changes...

Well, talk about love at first sight...

Haha! Poor Romeo...however, he is her knight in shining armor! Even if she manage to hit him in the face with a stack of plates...

Wow. Just wow. How on earth did you manage to translate Mercutio's monologue into something modern day and somewhat understandable?! It's barely understandable in the original play...

Oh my goodness, LOVE the way you seem to be developing Tybalt. Hehe, "designer labels from head to toe".

Oh, this is fantastic so far. :)

Lurv the story but marriage and all that jazz really? They b so young so sorry

I LOVED this! Please please finish it off? You've really got a talent for writing :-)

I absolutely love this scene! It brought me feelings of the first time I kissed my wife...thank you for that :)