I was a little surprized that this was the last chapter, but as I read it over, it all fit together perfectly. The wedding you describe is just what i would expect from these two at this point in their relationship after all they have been through. Interesting that all these letters are from Louisa's point of view. She seems overly optimistic that martin is looking forward to meeting all her London friends; let's hope she is right. You are an enormously gifted writer and i enjoyed your story immensley. I hope you are inspired to give us another one some time in the future

A wonderful "Rest of the Story" finish Boots. The letters are a novel way to tie up a lot of loose ends. With any luck there are some other loose ends to be bound up a bit and you will find them - and we will enjoy the result. And I understand the cameras are rolling in Port Isaac.

An unexpected, yet happy finish to this episode of the Perils of Louisa and Martin!

Superb writing. Well done.

Well what a surprise. Nice way to wrap it up though.

Their relationship has certainly been anything but smooth. I enjoyed your view of their lives over this period of time.
Thanks for sharing.

I love the meeting between Chris and Louisa. He is initially shocked at the pregnancy, but quickly realises this couldn't have come at a better time for Martin.

Edith and the girl pack is brilliant. Martin has no clue Edith is waiting to hook him with her talons and Louisa show's up to upset the apple cart.

Lovely description of the children playing on the train and nice transition from Louisa's POV to Martin's.

Wonderful - thank you!

To quote Louisa - neither of us would call the other...and all their friends keep telling them to do it - ackkkk! So now you've set them up for the train wreck - and why is Martin feeling sick when he sees Louisa - does he know on some level that things are about to blow up? Great story and chapter. Keep up the good writing

In a nanosecond all the thoughts, dreams and hopes of the past 30 chapters run through Martin's mind with the redhead present. No wonder he has the physiological response - and that before his eyes
have traveled to the tummy. Any hope for a good response is drifting on the wind over the village.

So here we are face to face at last. Anybody keep score on how many opportunities Martin missed?

Now all sides of the triangle are in place - Louisa, Martin, and the wicked witch! I like the lunch meeting with Chris, who recovered nicely, yet counseled another attempted phone call.

Really nicely done.

I'm glad to see the pack of teenagers finally got what was coming to them. Looking forward to your next update.

Confirmation that it is better not to know the future!

So did Martin just miss that fairly overt suggestion of hers that they have sex together?! He certain seems to have done!

Seems they are soon to be back to where they left off a few months ago. With one additional minor complication however.