Awww, happy ending! I read the whole thing just now, and at first I thought that there was gonna be a sequel or something cuz you had to cover a whole year, but you did that pretty neatly :p I loved this story when I started reading it, and I still love it! It's something else :p
-Lisa

Aww it's over... Sad times!
But this finale was amazing, Maltara was adorable and I even liked Oscar in this one, he was noble! :')
Everything about this story was sheer amazingness! (Is that even a word? Lol...) anyways, brilliant! I loved everything so much, one of my favourite stories. I LOVE fantasy stories, and your write them so well!

SUCH A BEAST!

- Molly

"Mal..." It was Oscar. "You in there, Buddy?"

WHAT THE HECK IS THIS CRAP?!

...
.FEELS. Walter's funeral. :'(

Ooh,Oscar...giving Nat to Mal,I like the way
you think...for probably the only time.

Aww,I loved that little ending!

I'm sad to see this story end:'(
But it was written well,FRIEND!
I can't wait for more stories from you,my Utah,
brace-less,FRIEND.

-Tori:)

Welp, I'm officially sobbing. Seriously, that was heartbreaking... And you say you can't write emotional scenes? Yes, yes you can! :') Great chapter Shelbeast!
Exciteedddd for C4D 2 :D

- Molly

Ooh,how about the most awesomest
title ever:Cause 4 Death 2.

Walter! .

Hehe,Maltara!

Ugh,Oscar has to go & ruin everything!

Great Chapter,FRIEND!

-Tori:)

Oh no no no no no! :O Not Walter... I had to literally restrain my tears in school when I was reading this... And oh the Maltara feels :')
I ADORED this, and YAAAYYYY! Cause 4 Death sequel! BEST THING I'VE HEARD ALL DAY! :D I can't wait, and this story is amazing... I love when you write fantasy, it's beautiful!
Can't wait for more!

- Molly

Hehe,yes!I support you &
hopefully you'll make a sequel!
I'll support you through it!

We're fighting!Yeah!

If only Natara heard what the
Darkness thingy said..

No final goodbye to anyone? Not even Natara...MY FEELS!

Yay,Mal survived!That's always good!

Walter?WHY?!I liked Walter!
He kinda reminded me of Alfred...
But,oh well,I'll go cry in a corner,FRIEND!

-Tori:)

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! Hell nah! Not Walter! :O Literally, I'm like... I can't even... Wow. That chapter was AMAZING. Walter...
I'm emotional right now okay?! (I get seriously emotional when I'm ill hahaha) great chapter, I got so giddy when I saw this updated, you cheered me up!

Such a beast! :D

- Molly

Oh Kai:)

Ooh!They're fighting!Awesome!

Oh no,Walter!

Great chapter,FRIEND!

-Tori:)

You're welcome!

Those people are acting like butt-holes!
I mean,seriously!I would happy to have
Mal as a king!Although I really wanted
him to kill Logan,he'll make a way better
ruler than Logan.

Ooh!You tell 'em Nat!All feisty & stuff!

Haha,Walter!Yes,Mal should marry Nat!

OH MY GAWD...Do you know how wide
my smile was at 'Kalaba Whiskey'?

Oh Kai...How I love our TOTALLY AWESOME
forensic tech!

Great chapter,FRIEND!

-Tori:)

Awesome chapter Shelbeast! How many more chapters are left of this AMAZING story? Because I don't want it to end hahah ;)
I loved it... Loveddddddd it!

- Molly

Yay!No worry about Oscar!
That always makes me happy!

Yay,Logan surrendered!

It was not a friendly kiss,Mal.
I know that.

I loved the whole story about Jacob
becoming king & stuff.

Aww,I loved the Walter & Mal moment!
It was so sweet!

Great chapter,FRIEND!

-Tori:)

This was a really awesome and interesting chapter! You're such a beast Shelby! :D I loved the little kiss and MAL IS KING! Whoop!
I didn't expect Logan to surrender so easily, really interesting twist!

Did I mention I LOVE when you do stories like this? They're so adventurous and I look forward to the updates all the time! :D

- Molly

Yay!Our sexy forensic tech's coming!Can't wait!

FRIEND,THAT WAS THE MOTHER LOAD OF ALLLLLLLLLLL CLIFFHANGERS!YOU MADE MY FEELS EXPLODE!

I feel so bad for Mal!Oscar don't need Natara!It's supposed to be like this:
boy meets girl.
boy falls for girl.
girl comes to her senses & dumps her douchebaggy boyfriend & gets with boy.

Great chapter,though!

-Tori:)

If you keep up this silence between you two, you'll ruin a perfectly good relationship."

THERE DON'T NEED TO BE A RELATIONSHIP!

Their gonna fight!Dun-Dun-Duhhhh!

Great chapter,FRIEND:)

-Tori