I really liked this. A lot. With sharp writing, this os brought to light a our 'shallow' understanding of these two bickering 'siblings'. I love the way you fleshed out that forbidden and unwanted UST of theirs that made any tender feelings so difficult to manage. Wonderful storytelling.

Lovely story! More well-written and witty than I was expecting. I was kind of hoping it would be a Rosalie/Edward paring, but oh well. I seem to be the only person who really likes them together.

I love your writing style, its elegant, classic, but modern. And that's really hard to do on paper, much less on the web.

I liked how you balanced out, family bickering/humor, with romance. I like the sensory use, to, I can really see it.

Keep on writing!