Wow...That was...*Sniff* No. I'm not gonna cry, I'm not gonna cry...Oh, f*ck this! *bawls* HOW COULD YOU DO THAT? ESPECIALLY TO YOUR OWN OC! *suddenly calms down* I'm fine. I'm fine. Sorry. I just hate tragedies SO MUCH! Sorry. Sorry. I'll go now

Rowan out! *sniff*

I get the feeling you're gonna come back to this, and everybody magically lives. XD

Well, it was a pretty damn good story, but I have only one issue I can find regarding Pokemon in general:

1st. The move Volt Tackle is exclusive to the Pichu line.

Otherwise great story, and very, very sad. :'(

This story was amazing! I also loved your OC i laughed so hard at the stuff she said.

I'm entering this into the advanceshipping oneshot contest if you don't mind.