 Intricacy 6/3/07 . chapter 45Ok. First things first:
Wow. Awesome story. Should be doing my math homework, but I wanted to finish reading what you've got up first. Took me forever, too. xP Finally it's done with, and now I'm waiting for an overdue update from you. XD But don't push yourself too hard; stress ontop of a hectic life isn't going to help you any.
So, insert the compliments.
Love your story. It's one of those stories that actually makes me think, contrary to the poorly written ones often found littering the Internet in which, when reading it, makes you feel like your IQ is literally dropping. Excellent gradual progression and characterization, too. And the plot line. So many things are going on, I can barely keep track about it. It would be nice if you could make a quick brief list of the things that are going on in the next chapter to help refresh the reader's memory, just to be ontop of things.
But the plots are really quite original. I didn't see some of them coming, especially that Myrtle one. Brilliant.
Though I'm wondering in the whole romance thing. Is it going to be a Ginny/Severus? From your profile, you called it a Ginny/Tom story. I personally vote for the Ginny/Tom (by far), as I still cannot imagine Snape in any sort of romantic relationship. Pretty pink hearts, googly eyes, and Snape, I think, don't really mesh well together, but that's only my opinion. Pardon my exaggeration-but you're the author, and you get to choose. It's only my input.
And now I question-will you still update this story on FF, or will you be updating it somewhere else? I'd be willing to switch over to another site to finish reading your story if you're unwilling to complete My Eternal Curse on FF. Please respond!
But great work on this story. I can see the effort being poured into it. Keep it up and update soon! |
 live.laugh.lovex3katie 5/31/07 . chapter 45 ok... so maybe i'm just impatient, but it's been like ten months since this has been updated. and i'm itching for more. is there even more to read? or have you just given up on it? |
 Intricacy 5/31/07 . chapter 24All right. I know i haven't reviewed and this is my second day reading this story, but it's an awesome story. I've tried this story once or twice but never really got beyond the third chapter, and when I finally did, I was entranced.
Am entranced. Whatever.
Anyways, your writing's great. I love how it started out slightly canon-like and gradually becomes something that no one really would have thought of while reading the original Harry Potter books. Great plot. Tis very original. Awesome work. I will not be able to view Gryffindor the same way. It's like the two houses have switched personalities entirely.
I was wondering if this will be a romance between Ginny and Tom. I guess not, but that's all right, I guess.
Keep it up! Awesome work! Onto the next chapter |
 Darkness Fault 5/30/07 . chapter 45 WOOT!Reviewer 601
Oh wow ... please oh please!update.I love this story i have beewn following this story for like two WHOLE years and i am like addicted. |
 BurningDevil 4/6/07 . chapter 45Please Write More! |
 Hebi R 3/1/07 . chapter 45I wonder how long it will take Snape to notice that Ginny was refering to herself in the plural form, especially the line that "WE'll BOTH die before becoming She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named." I am also wondering where Sirius is during all this, what he thinks of the real Ron's revelation, and how much longer Tom's existence is going to remain a secret to the new Grays. |
 live.laugh.love.x3.katie 2/25/07 . chapter 45just wanted to let you know that i am in love with your story. you write amazingly well and the plot is unique... it's quite ineresting, really. i've been reading this story for about two years now, which is kinda sad. i can definitely say that it's by far the longest i've ever hung on to one story. i check back about once a month to look for an update, and even though i occasionally come across one, they never take me long enough to read. 4 hours later and suddenly i wish it was 4 months later so i could keep on reading. it's improbably compelling, this story of yours. it keeps a reader hooked. like crack. ] only not quite so detrimental to the physical health. but mentally, it's torture.
- katie |
 zorra del fuego 12/25/06 . chapter 34I just found your story, and it's very good. Incredible, in fact. I wanted to commend your "wisdom in a nutshell" at the end of Chap. 34. It's quite profound. I'm sure you have a beta for this already, but if you have any other stories, I would be more than happy to be of assistance. |
 Barranca 12/20/06 . chapter 45Oh, this is a heart wrenching story. There were bits that made me laugh, like Dumbledore's animagus form, but all in all it tells about how unfair life is, and how easy it is to get lost. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, as it seems that there is a lot to tell about yet- Myrtle, Filius' friend, Tom and Severus, Harry, maybe also how Voldemort has managed to use the necklace's power. |
 Agent Pheonix 10/1/06 . chapter 45This is a really good story! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
 LandUnderWave 9/7/06 . chapter 45This is one of the best stories I've ever read! I love how you portray the character of Tom. Is there any particular reason for the 42s? Thanks! |
 Cris Malfoy 8/29/06 . chapter 45 Hi!
I missed this fic so badly... thanks for updating!
this story is going so well that there's nothing for me to point. it's actually the best one I'm reading at the moment. keep up the good work!
see ya... |
 Lyssasoulless 8/27/06 . chapter 45o.o That six month wait was worth it!1 |
 Ladiee101 8/26/06 . chapter 1wow |
 Amaress 8/22/06 . chapter 45 ...wow. That's all I can say. Wow.
I've been waiting for this chapter since forever, but it was worth it. Please don't take as long next time? For me? |