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| Reviews for Magykal Fate |
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  Riain Tennesne 5/12/13 . chapter 4 A good chapter, overall. |
| Riain Tennesne 4/28/13 . chapter 3 Heh, nice Darke Magyk there, Laurine. Although, this chapter was short. |
| Riain Tennesne 4/28/13 . chapter 2 Again, grammar, but other than that it was pretty good... I don't know that "Septimus" would be crying though. And what about this Odale you mentioned? |
| Riain Tennesne 4/28/13 . chapter 1 Pretty interesting, though grammar mistakes need to be fixed. |
| Lyall Areyel 2/14/13 . chapter 19 Yes, great ending although grammar errors appear and such. -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 2/14/13 . chapter 18 Ah, parallel to my own young army years, I believe. XD This is good. -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 1/12/13 . chapter 17 I'm liking this story. -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 1/12/13 . chapter 16 Pain. Yes, pain... So is this chapter called Pain or A Short Visit? -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 1/12/13 . chapter 15 Good. -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 1/12/13 . chapter 14 This traitor stuff happens. Trust me. I know. Fairly good job with the chapter. -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 1/12/13 . chapter 13 I'm not in a good mood. Not to do with this at all, but something else. Something. So all I can say, in a dull and pained voice, is "a little confusing, but good. Longer than the others. I wonder why Laurine had that specific nightmare." -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 1/7/13 . chapter 12 I love Magyk. _ -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 1/7/13 . chapter 11 Short but good, again not much to say. -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 1/7/13 . chapter 10 Go 412! XD Crap battlesilenceright... (Sorry if I seem eccentric. :P) -Ly |
| Lyall Areyel 1/7/13 . chapter 9 _ Good. -Ly |
