could use refinement but i like it somewhat.

OK, here's the deal. I read the first paragraph of your story Raizer Z and didn't even bother to keep going; yes, it was THAT bad. But I thought 'well, this was written a while ago, maybe this author got better' so I decided to read another of your stories, the most recent one (A.K.A. this one). My verdict? You need to sue whoever scammed you with those English lessons, because your English is just not good at all. Yes, you got better than when you wrote Raizer Z, but it's still quite bad.

wow you sure don't update for someone who supposedly has all his stories almost done. not that it matters. your writing is horrid at best

Oh, look. It's one of those fanfics that never get finished. Don't freaking discriminate others whe you do the same thing yourself, failure