A very satisfying end to this epic tale. Of course it's not the end, is it?

You're definitely keeping up the suspense.

I'm terribly curious to see what happens next! I hope you're writing at top speed. ;-)

This is getting really enthralling. I'm looking forward to see how the story evolves.

Oh, Steel with a burr in his speech... lovely. And what about Sapphire and Silver back at the Inn? I hope you're writing feverishly.

The Colonel always gets what he wants? Hmmm... perhaps not.

I'm glad to see this continuing. The conflict between Steel and Silver is very dramatic.

Very riveting tale. Now I'll go looking for the rest of this story.