dude make this a fully story it would be epic

great one shot love it

I wish there was more stories like this. I want Satele and Revan talking about the differences in their timelines. Though I believe it was too much to ask.

Awesome. Just awesome.

The concept is a good one, and it's fairly well-written, but you have some pacing issues you may need to work out. Perhaps insert more dialogue from Satele, or describe her reaction as Revan talks. As it is, the story is like enjoying a nice walk on the beach when suddenly a giant wall of words comes and hits you in the face. Odd metaphors aside, why would Revan and Satele randomly meet? Wouldn't it be easier for them to stay behind after a meeting/debriefing/Revan about to go running off yet again?